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Moon Witch, Spider King

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2022

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Part 1, Chapters 1-4Chapter Summaries & Analyses

Part 1: “No Name Woman”

Part 1, Chapter 1 Summary

The narrator, Sogolon, who will eventually become the Moon Witch, recounts a dream memory of her childhood. She and her three brothers live in the jungle. Her brothers keep her shackled in a termite pit, only bringing her out to plow the fields. They blame Sogolon for the death of their mother, who died while giving birth to her. The two older brothers prepare for the donga (a tournament of stick fighting).

One night, she is pulled from the termite hill by a giant python. As it slithers toward the family hut, a woman bursts forth from its innards. The snake makes love with the middle brother and whispers that the brothers must kill their sister. He says they’ve tried leaving her to die in the jungle, but she came back unscathed, protected, he believes, by “grass fairies.” Their entire village shuns them because they believe Sogolon is a witch.

Over time, Sogolon grows stronger, but she is still confined to the termite pit and forced to labor in the fields. Her brothers sexually abuse her, claiming “no woman would have them in their own village” (9). The youngest brother threatens her with genital mutilation. Sogolon realizes her brothers are liars who have dark secrets: Having impregnated the python woman several times over, the middle brother denies knowing her and smashes her eggs out of shame; the older brother claims to have perpetrated murder and rape, but Sogolon “see[s] that nothing that come out of the mouth of these brothers could ever pass as true” (10).

Sogolon plots her escape, slowly gnawing through her rope until, one day, she breaks free. Fleeing the termite pit, she stumbles into the youngest brother, who beats her savagely. Desperate to escape, she grabs his sword and lops off his hand. She takes refuge in a forest, where she is found by Miss Azora, a sex worker from the town of Kongor. Miss Azora brings Sogolon back to her brothel, where the women care for her.

Years pass and Sogolon reaches puberty. Miss Azora gives her a room of her own, and on her first night there, another woman, Yanya, sneaks in and warns her that Azora is only grooming her as the next “forbidden lily” (underage sex worker). She gives Sogolon an herb that will put the men to sleep. Using this strategy, Sogolon avoids physical contact with the clients, until the fifth man, who rapes her before drinking the herb. Sogolon begins robbing the men while they sleep. Miss Azora doesn’t consider Sogolon special, although she brings in consistent business.

One night, as Azora orders Yanya out to the street to solicit business, an Ukundunka—a monster bound to a talisman—appears, flinging Azora against the wall and tearing through the brothel. It pursues Sogolon, ripping her door from its hinges. Just then, a woman’s voice echoes in the hall, and the monster is stilled. The woman—the master of the Ukundunka—asks Sogolon for the onyx talisman she stole from her husband, which binds him to the creature. When Sogolon protests that she only robs the men who come to her room, the woman takes her away from the brothel to live with her. She asks the girl’s name, and Sogolon, who has never had a name and has only been called “girl,” chooses her mother’s name.

Part 1, Chapter 2 Summary

Sogolon lives with the woman, Mistress Komwono, and her husband. The house is so grand and sprawling, she constantly discovers new rooms. She is wary of the master of the house, fearing he will try to assault her, but he wants Sogolon to leave because he still assumes his wife doesn’t know how Sogolon came by his talisman. Mistress Komwono instructs Sogolon in the basics of hygiene and comportment, grooming her for something, although Sogolon doesn’t know what.

From the high windows of the house, Sogolon observes the city. The cook takes her out to run errands, and Sogolon is awed by the size of the buildings and the hustle-bustle of the people on the streets. The cook warns her of danger in certain quarters, but to Sogolon, the city is a “wonder,” and she’s left the real danger behind in the termite pit. One night, the master does come to her room, but he comes instead for the enslaved girl who shares Sogolon’s room. Unable to sleep afterward, Sogolon sees a gang of boys on the street, who trigger a memory. She follows them through the winding streets to an open square marked by the Tower of the Black Sparrowhawk. There, the boys, all bearing long sticks, begin to spar like her brothers did, although less viciously. Watching the boys “swing, sweep, dodge, and parry and strike and strike again” (28) makes Sogolon yearn for a stick of her own, to mimic the dance of battle.

The next day, Sogolon eavesdrops on a conversation between the master and mistress. The details are unclear, but Sogolon gleans that the mistress is the real brains of the household, understanding far more of social and political matters than her husband gives her credit for. Because of strict gender roles, she must defer to him, stroke his ego, and give him credit for her ideas.

One night, Sogolon ventures out to watch the boys stick-fighting, and after they all disperse, she finds one stick left behind. She takes it, swinging and leaping in the darkness.

After four months in the Komwono house, the mistress decides Sogolon is more suited for “gentler ways,” like brushing the mistress’s hair. She continues with Sogolon’s etiquette lessons and orders her never to refuse her master if he comes to her in the night. One evening, while bathing, Sogolon considers the women in the household—the mistress, who is able to keep her own wealth even throughout marriage; Nanil, the enslaved girl who may one day bear the master a child (the mistress is not interested in children); and Sogolon herself, who wants to move on. She is captivated by the master’s stories of far-flung nomadic tribes who wander the “sand seas” and never put down roots, always moving even when still.

One night, Sogolon watches the donga (stick fight). After the current champion wins his fight, a stranger enters the ring. The two men fight, and the stranger defeats the champion with ease. Sogolon flees back to the house, fearful of a man in the crowd. The mistress is visiting her sister, and the master is asleep, so Sogolon explores the house. In the library, she finds a boli, a statue of sand, dirt, blood, and clay: a “power object.” She is discovered by the master, who knows where she goes at night. He knocks her to the floor and tries to rape her, but Sogolon, envisioning a storm and a strong wind, taps into the power of the boli. The master is flung against the wall and impaled on a sharp beam.

Part 1, Chapter 3 Summary

Mistress Komwono is joined by her sisters in the grieving ritual. She isolates herself in her room but believes the bed is haunted by a spirit. The family fears that the master’s death is the work of evil spirits. As the house swells with visiting family members, tensions flare over how to handle the master’s death—exorcise the house, flog the enslaved girl until she confesses to witchcraft, or allow the magistrate to complete his investigation. They cannot even agree on a time for the burial since he didn’t die “properly,” and his spirit could be lost.

Sogolon sleeps in the grain bin, fearful that the mistress will implicate her in the master’s death. She dreams of running away, lost in a swirling wind. The next day, the men slaughter a cow, looking for divine portents in its blood. They bicker over the family name and wealth as well as how to keep evil spirits at bay.

Sogolon notices a change in herself, an indefinable feeling that creeps under her skin at night. She relives the scene of the master’s death, blaming herself—she trespassed in the library, she fought the master’s advances when she was ordered not to—but her inner voice disagrees: “I didn’t do anything. The wind do it” (51).

After the master’s burial, they slaughter another cow and celebrate the master’s passing. He is now an ancestor “watching and making judgment of both the living and the dead” (52). After a cleansing ritual, the Komwono house is “restored in favor” (52), and the mistress evicts all the family members. The wealth is hers, not her husband’s, so they all leave empty-handed.

Mistress Komwono is invited to an audience with the King Sister of Fasisi (a kingdom in the North Lands) from whose court she was banished years ago. The night before they depart, Sogolon has a vision of Namil accusing her of the master’s murder. On the road to Fasisi, Sogolon imagines the mistress’s stares are accusations of guilt. They pass deserted villages and ruins of old kingdoms. They stop to rest, and Keme, their royal escort, disrobes and bathes in the river. Sogolon is mesmerized by his naked body, more confident and less “violent” than the bodies who visited Miss Azora’s. He offers to teach her how to ride a horse, but she declines. 

Part 1, Chapter 4 Summary

Sitting around a campfire, Keme recounts a myth. The great god of the sky has two sons who “run rough through the kingdom” (62). The god banishes them to an earth that has not yet been created. One son, Dumata, sprinkles yellow dust beneath him, creating a land of gold. The other son, Durara, sprinkles white dust and creates salt. The land of gold values only beauty, the land of salt only practicality. Trade and cooperation would seem the best strategy for these two lands, but instead, they wage war and plunder the other’s resources.

Keme and the mistress’s guards (the “Seven Wing”) debate the nature and value of war. Keme asks Sogolon her opinion—what is a cause worth fighting for? She doesn’t have an answer, and she feels humiliated for seeming ignorant. When she admits to Keme that she never wants war. He replies, “Girl, war is always upon us” (66). The next morning during a riding lesson, Keme “spikes” Sogolon’s horse; it rears and gallops off. Terrified, she struggles with the horse until she discovers how to ease it into a slow turn. She is furious with Keme, but he simply smiles—she has learned how to handle a runaway horse.

As they ascend the mountain to the city gates, Keme asks Sogolon about her parents. She doesn’t know either of them, she replies, only her three brutal brothers. Keme pities her, but she rejects his pity. Her life has been too hard for her to waste time reflecting on the hardness of it.

They enter Fasisi, a city very different from Kongor. They pass the nobles’ enclosures first before making their way to the royal palace. They stop in the trade district, but the mistress demands to be taken directly to the king and queen. As a safety measure, however, all visitors must stay in the trade district until vetted by the king’s chancellor.

They spend their days in a grand guest house. One night, Sogolon sees Keme tussling with a lion, one more strange sight in this strange city. He invites her “around back” to show her something, but she is suspicious of his motives. She retires for the night, lying awake and staring at the rich tapestry of artwork.

Mistress Komwono trades court gossip. Rumors tell of a witchfinder in court, who is accompanied by seven demon children. When did witchcraft become a crime, Mistress Komwono wonders. The king, Kwash Kagar, is near death, and the crown prince is waiting in the wings with the manipulative witchfinder at his side. The current court—its personnel and inner dynamics—is completely unfamiliar to the mistress.

Keme and Sogolon tour the vast city market when a group of Okyeame— heralds of the court—announce the king is “about his business” (a euphemism for near death). Just then, a cook informs them that the mistress has been summoned to the court; they rush back to the guest compound where the Aesithe court chancellor—questions the mistress. Next, he interviews Sogolon, asking her about the master’s death. Later, the mistress wonders how to initiate contact with the king’s daughter “not as a subject, but as a friend. As a woman” (86).

Part 1, Chapter 1-4 Analysis

James’s world is firmly rooted in a culturally specific mythology. Much of these early chapters reference gods, magic, the “nine worlds,” and a mysterious python woman. The royal escort, Keme, even recounts a mythical story involving two brothers and the creation of the North and South lands. Like so many cross-cultural creation stories, the tale of Dumata and Durara establishes a firmament populated with gods before the creation of the earth. Myths are stories that cultures create to make sense of their world, and the mythology of Moon Witch, Spider King is no different. The North and South lands, although currently at peace, have a long history of war, and those affected by it must make sense of the brutality of humans toward each other. They create a story of two troublesome brothers who create the world, but rather than cooperating and sharing resources, they hoard their own and pillage the other’s. War, claims Keme, is always on the horizon, and the tale of Dumata and Durara attempts to explain humanity’s darker impulses by placing responsibility in the hands of two greedy and jealous gods. By inserting divine intervention into the equation, human aggression and cruelty becomes explainable, less an intrinsic part of the human character and simply, cosmically inevitable. This early introduction of a deep-rooted cultural myth about the inevitability of war also foreshadows the novel’s coming violence, war, and political maneuvering. With this, James creates narrative tension; there’s an expectation of violence, and the new setting of the royal palace establishes political intrigue as the source.

James establishes this mythical tone early on with a narrative voice that evokes the oral tradition of many early cultures. His narrator speaks in a sort of Jamaican patois—a creole-based English dialect. He beseeches the reader to “See the girl!” (3) as if leading an audience through the story while sitting around a campfire. When Sogolon is questioned about the master’s death, James describes her silence: “For all Sogolon do is watch. Then she watch herself watching, watching to the point of knowing deep what is not her business” (47). Afro-Caribbean cultures have a rich history of storytelling as a way to pass history on to future generations, and James incorporates that tradition in his fictional narrative. While utilizing orality in a textual framework may seem contradictory, James—who has described his work as postcolonial—may be reclaiming the tradition as a bulwark against colonialism’s tendency to silence Indigenous voices (Wagner, Phoebe. “The Space Between Postcolonial Literature and Epic Fantasy.” Nerds of a feather, flock together, 25 March 2019). The voice, the mythical tone, and the fantastical narrative are all seamlessly integrated into a world that feels utterly complete, a world that has seemingly existed long before and has just waited for someone to reveal it.

James also establishes the book’s theme of Misogyny and the Oppression of Women in these early chapters. The book opens immediately with Sogolon—yet unnamed—enduring horrible treatment. As with many fantasy protagonists, her parents have died, leaving her at the mercy of the men around her; she sleeps in a termite pit, endures physical and sexual violence from her brothers, and is ignored by other villagers, who think she is a witch. Sogolon’s lack of a name emphasizes the universality of her plight; girls and women in this world are subjected to constant violence and dehumanization and are discredited as witches when they seek help. Her experience of violence at the hands of her brothers emphasizes the way patriarchal power structures are replicated in domestic environments, but James asserts that misogynistic abuse is not simply a matter of individual sexist men perpetuating violence; Sogolon escapes her home but only finds more danger when she is forced into sex work. While this world’s misogyny seems inescapable, James offers two hints at Sogolon’s future heroine status. First, she is able to choose a name, thereby starting her journey of self-discovery and identity rather than being an anonymous “girl.” Second, she is drawn to the boys’ stick fighting and begins practicing with a stick on her own. Sogolon yearns for a way to fight and defend herself, and her first steps toward doing so foreshadow her coming role as the book’s chosen one (alongside her uncontrollable power over the wind). With this, James hints that Sogolon will not only gain power over her own life but take steps toward fighting misogyny in her world at large.

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